I'd like to take this space to come out of the closet to the Metal Tabs community. I'm expressing it through terrible writing skills and my self-portrait:

http://www.kaplink.net/7610/archive...mmons-thumb.jpg

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You have a UFC champion called TREVOR.

I think that pretty much sums it up.

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I got an actor named Trevor.

Sums up your career in motion pictures.

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I don't see this 'short ass movie script.' I just see a poorly written summation of a few scenes. This is not what's called a 'script,' it's what's called a 'treatment,' or would be if it were more thorough. It's also what's called 'shit.' Or would be if it were more thorough. If I thought you cared I'd give you a little run down of the problems with it, but I think Jim more or less pointed out the film's flaw. Actually, I still wouldn't be able to, because in addition to it being pretty bad, you've written so little it's impossible to give a constructive criticism. It's only possible to note the poor quality.

Thanks David Cross, you reminded me to point out that this film will only last about 15 minutes and the script (or better named outline) was something i put out quick partly because of improv (on both the writer's and actors' parts).

I should have also mentioned i only posted this to show my friend whos in the movie but couldnt see it because of aol and AIMs shitty problems.

It is a goofy movie, but its still going to be better than flightplan, because flightplan sucked. Why the hell would Jodie Foster blow up a multi-million dollar plane when there was an army of police just waiting outside to arrest/kill someone?

use email and dont take your failure to operate messaging programs out on us

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Don't use the forum for this reason. Better yet, it'd help us all out if you just didn't use it for any reason.

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