Burned to the bone
Rotted Flesh, Stuck to stone..

Grave infested mites
Scrawling all over..
A fiestiva on a dark, gloomy night

Eye sockets filled with formildahide
Mutated flesh burning
inside skull
A site that's sure to make you crawl..

Wooden caskets, rotted to the core
Many parasites inside them
And plenty more where they came from..

Dead beings walking again
Some mutilated , others feeling violated..
Burned to death, flesh and bone
A sick feeling in Your stomach makes you want to vomit
Unimaginable horror crosses your mind..
Time to kiss your life goodbye...:[



Note:Got this idea from Creepshow two..

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Your thoughts are put down well. The spelling and all is good, but it seems like a list of ingredients and misses the mark to me because there is no ebb or receding. It's just all there. If you could work something into it to make it less gooey sounding and give it a little tale of substance you might better it. If you like it though the way it is keep it that way. It's just my opinion.

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Yeah. This is one of those tunes where I just think of those things and lay it down, just like you said. I didn't really take the time to think about what I was writing and etc. I wrote a lot of tunes last year and didn't take the time to really assess them. I have some older material you might enjoy. I'll post it when I get more time later on.....

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That's cool . Always glad to read another writer.

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