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2004-02-03, 18:45
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"There's No Yellow Snow in Jamaica" :D
I wrote this after being inspired by another piece someone at my forum wrote. I just thought I'd share it with ya cuz I got some good replies from it. Thanks for reading. (And P'o't' , I haven't forgotten about ya !)
"There's No Yellow Snow in Jamaica"
(reggae beat)
There's no yellow snow in Jamaica
Mr. Marley he don't know what he missed
No yellow snow in Jamaica
So you can't tell where the dogs pissed
I went walking on the beach one day
And there was a woman with a chow
I thought it was pretty hot for a dog like that
But she looked at me and she said bow wow
I went walking on the beach one evening
With a dutchie I knew had some power
I approached a beautiful thing with a shih tzu
But as I asked her my feet felt a warm shower
(bridge)
No , no, no I don't want to go home
Back up to where the snow flies
No, no , no don't make me go
To where the yellow snow lies
(chorus)
There's no yellow snow in Jamaica
Mr. Marley he don't know what he missed
No yellow snow in Jamaica
So you can't tell where the dogs pissed
I took a big airplane to the north
And I saw a man with a spitz
But the snow by him was not yellow
I think his dog had the .....
(chorus)
There's no yellow snow in Jamaica
Mr. Marley he don't know what he missed
No yellow snow in Jamaica
So you can't tell where the dogs pissed
BJH
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2004-02-03, 18:57
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Hey. Not too bad. Not really my kind of lyrics, but none the less,
it's hilarious...:[
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2004-02-03, 18:59
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lol, kinda funny and catchy, put some nice groovy reggae under it and you're set  |
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2004-02-05, 21:07
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Thanks guys ! Glad you liked it. |
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2004-02-17, 09:06
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can i please have a link to your other forum, i am interested to see the quality of the writing there
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2004-02-17, 23:15
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Thats pretty catchy... haha mind if I put bass tabs to it?
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2004-02-19, 02:51
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Originally Posted by deMANUfacture
can i please have a link to your other forum, i am interested to see the quality of the writing there
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The tabcrawler poetry forum. And yeah, the postings there get great crits. I've started to post there...
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2004-02-19, 05:15
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awesome thanks for that....im keen to see this place
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2004-02-22, 19:41
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pArdon moi for being gone for so long.
Powers has posted some stuff, and we do have a variety of writers and performers there. I dunno what I'm doing there. Stop by for a visit anytime.
And if anyone ever records this I'd dearly love to hear it.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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