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2004-02-02, 22:44
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God's So Called Gift
The lyrics are incomplete but I feel like posting them anyway because it is one of my first works in a long time that isn't first person. If you want to pretend your listening to it then I'll describe the song to you. It is an E-tuned thrashing song thats as fast and aggressive as Slayer but a bit more melodic and has bits of guitar harmonys throughout. The verse lyrics sound like the verse from Anthrax's "What Doesn't Die." The song is open to interpretation but I wrote it about a certain singer who has been pissing me off. Whoever guesses who the singer is gets a cookie.
God’s So Called Gift
(verse one)
He comes in, joins the flawed machine
A perfect fit, they are complete
They make their presence known real well
They all cause chaos and raise hell
They build an army from it all
A mighty force that cannot fall
Despite social changes it lives
So why would anyone leave it
(pre chours)
What makes you think you can do it all
The same thing you and the others shared
Your influence is nothing now
There is no I in army
(chours)
You’re starting to believe your press
As you make yourself, more a mess
You think when you speak, there’s rejoice
Cause you love the sound of your voice
A Legend
Inside Your
Own Mind
You think you’re
God’s gift to
our life
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RIP Dimebag
"Dime brought the life into so many people, how could somebody take his?" - Charlie Benante
Last edited by Metalhead_Dave : 2004-03-06 at 02:20.
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2004-02-03, 02:42
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You wrote a song about John Mayer?
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2004-02-03, 03:54
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Anselmo?
Durst?
Timberlake?
Come on, throw me a freakin' bone here! On a side note, the lyrics are pretty nice. Good job with the rhyming.
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Through me you pass into the city of woe
Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here
Against the concert of the Immortals he cannot stand alone.
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2004-02-03, 07:19
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Thats a good thought mem, Phil that is. I was thinking Durst...
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2004-02-03, 12:32
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I would never think of Limp Bizkit OR N'Sync to be a dominant machine. Both of you guys get cookies because yes, it is Phil.
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RIP Dimebag
"Dime brought the life into so many people, how could somebody take his?" - Charlie Benante
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2004-02-03, 23:50
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I also hate Anselmo.
*eats cookie*
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Through me you pass into the city of woe
Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here
Against the concert of the Immortals he cannot stand alone.
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2004-02-04, 00:00
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Write one about dimesack
*ditto*
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2004-02-04, 00:16
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Dimebag doesn't bother me.......he's cool.
Anselmo's arrogant and thinks he's God. He isn't cool.
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Through me you pass into the city of woe
Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here
Against the concert of the Immortals he cannot stand alone.
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2004-02-04, 00:33
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Dime would do anything to make a dollar...man I miss the CFH days....
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2004-02-04, 02:18
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I ain't gonna write anything about Dime. I love Dime. Damageplan over Superjoint all the way.
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RIP Dimebag
"Dime brought the life into so many people, how could somebody take his?" - Charlie Benante
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2004-02-04, 03:56
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Thats true, but CFH days > damageplan/sjr
Back when Phil wasnt a pussy. Back when Dimesack was the strong silent one. Back when Vinnie was a fucking 20 diffrent groupies a night. Oh, wait...
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2004-02-04, 17:54
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Anselmo does suck
I'd have to agree and say that nowadays anselmo sucks.......but I miss those sweet high pitches on CFH. Why does every frontman turn into an arrogant egotistical S.O.B. after success? It must be in the water.........
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2004-02-07, 22:02
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Petrucci didn't. (L,B'XXX ducks before the vegies fly.) Hey, I like Dream Theater.
Oh , you guys are all arrogant anyways or you wouldn't be metalheads.
And the song was really sweet sounding lyrically. Nice flow and all. Definite metal feel.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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