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Old 2004-02-02, 02:48
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Post THE HAUNTED RUINS (PART 2)

Years have passed, and many houses are haunted by evil
apparations..
The time has come for everyone to pray against this
ominous incantation..

Night falls over the ancient burial grounds,
a huge storm comes with strong winds from the north
Lightning and hail come down with ease
An abnormal disturbance is about to begin
from a plane of the unknown,
take with me, the essence of a sacred stone
It holds the keys to many phenomenons..

I wait, and lay there,
Waiting for my soul to be taken..
I am at the center point between consciousness and
unconsciousness,
good and evil, life and death..

My closet door swings open in my bedroom
Furious laughter bursts out,
A bright light emanates from the back of it..
I am trapped , nowhere to run, nowhere to hide,
Great winds pull at me, trying to snatch me into the light..
I am holding on to the bed as much as I can,
For I am being captured by the Damned...

I can't hold on any longer
I release myself and disappear into the light..
And on the path into Eternal Damnation.....

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Old 2004-02-02, 17:05
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Originally Posted by BestialWarrior
I can't hold on any longer
I release myself and disappear into the light..
And on the path into Eternal Damnation.....


Icing on the cake.
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Old 2004-02-02, 17:15
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I assume this is written for Black Metal.

Lyrics seem kind of bland and cliche.
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Through me you pass into the city of woe
Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here

Against the concert of the Immortals he cannot stand alone.
 
Old 2004-02-04, 18:07
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Lame, there is only one King Diamond and you are not him!!! Be original or be dead.
 
Old 2004-02-04, 20:28
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thanks for negative comment. I appreciate it. This has no king diamond influence whatsoever. I've heard his music, but I don't have any of his cds. This is my original stuff. If you don't like it, then oh well...
Fuck off.....Don't get too personal with me man...It's just a matter of opinion..
and no, I wasen't a damn boy scout either...
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