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2004-01-28, 15:23
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Lo, they do call to me...
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We're all dead
type o negative influenced poem/song
We're All Dead
a bed of white roses, made red by my blood
blackened by my hate, burned by my love
strewn across the floor, my last dying thoughts
cutting into my flesh, my soul slowly rots
but nothing matters, and no one cares
and no one is questioning, cus we're all dead
but as my blood splatters, all i get are stares
and no one is questioning, cus we're all dead
carving with eloquince, my sorrow and more
bleeding misfortunes on an empty floor
onlookers cringe, as though it twer cruel
my eyes buring thier souls, that reflect in the pool
but nothing matters, and no one cares
and no one is questioning, cus we're all dead
but as my blood splatters, all i get are stares
and no one is questioning, cus we're all dead
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2004-01-31, 21:38
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Yup, you're right on Type O. It's perfect in their style. I could hear the song in my head and I bet it would be fun to do. No problems with technicalities. I thought it was real good.
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2004-02-01, 00:56
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Originally Posted by MoonRaven
type o negative influenced poem/song
We're All Dead
a bed of white roses, made red by my blood
blackened by my hate, burned by my love
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This is the only part I like.
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2004-02-22, 07:56
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Originally Posted by MoonRaven
onlookers cringe, as though it twer cruel
my eyes buring thier souls, that reflect in the pool
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I like this part. When i read things, i visualize it. That particular part gave a cool image of a dark red pool of blood and a fiery reflection in it of burning souls/spirits, whatever. It looked cool anyway. is that what you were aiming for?
I dont know if its cause you said it, or maybe its the lyircs. but definately
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2004-02-22, 16:03
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Lo, they do call to me...
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Originally Posted by timedragon
I like this part. When i read things, i visualize it. That particular part gave a cool image of a dark red pool of blood and a fiery reflection in it of burning souls/spirits, whatever. It looked cool anyway. is that what you were aiming for?
I dont know if its cause you said it, or maybe its the lyircs. but definately
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that is exactly the image i was going for
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2004-02-22, 18:20
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hmmmm.. Reminds me of Obituary... Pretty disturbing details there MoonRaven!... heh....
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2004-02-24, 23:17
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Lo, they do call to me...
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thank you, bestial, i like to be somewhat graphic
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