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Old 2003-10-20, 05:32
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Plague of Undead

here's another death metal tune.
Enjoy.


"Plague of Undead"

your death was so quick and sweet,
lying there accepting your demise,
you are hell's spawn seed,
at midnight, you shall rise,

sufficate and begin to transform,
your heart has ceased beating
inside your chest the maggots swarm,
its time to begin the feeding,
break out of your prison,
the living are your prey,
devour all the children,
hell shall reign the day,

slaughter,
the cries grow,
louder,
to late to,
repent,
for killing the,
innocent,

you exist to only murder,
with the mind of a demon,
earth will be one big massacre,
mankind is now in season,
feast upon the living severed,
the christians have all fled,
the killing will go on forever,
with the plague of undead,
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Old 2003-10-20, 11:36
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pretty nice. this sounds very kool to me. ooo man that would be hella freaky if that like happened in real life haha good job dude, write more
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Old 2003-10-20, 12:33
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Dude, your sig is is crazy !! Cool. Wrong(as in funny), but cool.

Your song had a good flow to it and was very picturesque. Not just a gross-out thing. Tastefully done piece. By all means write more. Are you going to hook it up and post the finished product with music ?
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Old 2003-10-21, 18:32
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as much as i would like to post a finished product, with music and all, im not sure how i would be able to post it on here. but maybe i can in the near future, because our band still needs a drummer and bassist.
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Old 2003-10-21, 20:06
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yeah I have that problem too... I have all those songs on this forum under the 'Nocturnal Sun' thread, but don't have a band to work out arrangements. I only have one song recorded and thats just an instrumental... anyway u should do some more lyrics if u find the time/influence to, cuz it sounds good.
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