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Old 2003-10-04, 18:59
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Ahhh, back in business..my attempt at DeathMetal lyrics...

if you don't catch it...paragraph 4 is a change of person...in the same mind.
(, how I always write aout human insanity, it still is, just in a different form.)


Secrets of the Blood Wine

Rotting flesh bound in ropes
Before the church of rotting Christ
Smelling up the infested
Seeping in the walls of the damned

Swarm of flies surround the body
Fate judgment to your deliverance
Drinking the blasphemed water
Tightening your stomach into knots

Kneeling before your whore
Kissing the dirty feet of death
The body of sacrifice quivers
Into death it feeds on life deprived

What life…is brought to us?
Who are you…to speak of me?
Verbigeration…repeat after me

Do I deserve this life brought to me?
Sentenced to death and raped there after?

The body falls off the alter onto the floor
Dripping with sweat, racing with fear of god
Run for your lives, deviance is issued forth
Forgive me father…for I have sinned.
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Old 2003-10-04, 19:03
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nice stuff, but kinda cliché when you went for the church of rotting christ
 
Old 2003-10-04, 19:11
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Re: Ahhh, back in business..my attempt at DeathMetal lyrics...

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Originally posted by powersofterror
Rotting flesh bound in ropes
Before the church of blessed god
Smelling up the infested
Seeping in the walls of the damned

is that better????
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.


This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
 
Old 2003-10-04, 19:13
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lol, no that sucks, you're not thinking of doing white metal do you?


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Old 2003-10-04, 20:18
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not too shabby, 7/10, I've seen you write better though...
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