
2003-09-22, 02:46
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Four years of Hard Time
Hatred for my continuing high school years(in and out of school).
Enjoy
Four Years of Hard Time
(Verse one)
I wake up tired and angry
I don’t wanna deal with today
I steal a bit more euphoria
But the back of my mind knows I’m here
To stay
WAIT FOR-E-VER
Take your time, I’m just in a rush
FEEL THE HOT BURN
Brings me back to a SAD reality
TAKE A WORSE TURN
Step into the bitter cold world
OFF TO GO LEARN
Carry me off, to learn to be in hell
(Chorus)
Everyday it's all the same, they shove it in my face
Fascist figures, asshole pears, no chance to get away
When I'm home I hear what’s most important's what I hate
Worst four years of my life while the world thinks that it great
FOUR YEARS OF HARD TIME!
(Verse two)
I'm tired, I'm bored and I want out
I think what’s not to think about
I'm wasting away on my ass
Being force-fed what I don't accept
What left?
BLIND FOOLS ROAM HERE
I have the eye so why ain't I king
IRON FIST RULES HERE
In the land of the free and the home of the brave
TORTURED FOR MY GEAR
The ones here will NEVER understand
ENOUGH TO SHED TEARS
If only the people knew what was going on
(Chorus)
FOUR YEARS OF HARD TIME!
FOUR YEARS OF HARD TIME!
FOUR YEARS OF HARD TIME!
FOUR YEARS OF HARD TIME!
(Bridge)
When I return
I glimpse no fate
But they rush me
To what I hate
I'm here and there
It's all the same
I must escape
Escape this shame
(Verse three)
TELL ME WHAT TO DO
Even though it has no authority
COLOR MY BLOOD BLUE
There's better things not sophisticated
ANGRY AT ME TOO
Don't care anymore what your bitter about
WAIT FOR DAY’S NEW
And yet I know It’s the same day again
(Chorus)
FOUR YEARS OF HARD TIME!
FOUR YEARS OF HARD TIME!
FOUR YEARS OF HARD TIME!
FOUR YEARS OF HARD TIME!
FOUR YEARS OF HARD TIME!
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FOUR YEARS OF HARD TIME!
FOUR YEARS!
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FOUR YEARS!
FOUR YEARS!
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Last edited by Metalhead_Dave : 2003-09-22 at 02:48.
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2003-09-22, 20:05
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Sounds like Motley Crue or Twisted Sister
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2003-09-22, 22:57
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Did you have to be so damn brutal? Why don't you stab me in the heart while your at it! Goddamn I was expecting criticism but that is just plain mean!
Seriously though, I don't think Motley Crue complained about anything. Twisted Sister maybe but Motley Crue hell no.
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2003-09-23, 00:17
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It reminds me of the two because I can hear it as an anthem, people singing along with the parts in bold.
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2003-09-23, 00:27
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OH!!!!!! Okay. Thats cool. But I scream those lines. But thanks for clearing things up.
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2003-09-26, 18:58
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Hey there. And now a lady's point of view..... I thought it was pretty darn good as far as flow goes and the shouts I had no problem realizing. It sounded like something a younger RATM would have done in their high school years. I got the non-conformity and the disagreement with established views. I thought you worded it well. Something I did want to commend you on was the lack of vulgaries that would have made this sound like a uneducated rant. Broader audiences are reached when there's more intelligence than shock to a piece.
Not bad at all.
And I was a young hippie-type back in the day so I know what it is to
be non- conformist.
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Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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2003-09-26, 19:04
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I try to keep curses at a minimum with some certain exeptions though. My songs have only one, if any, f-bomb(except for two of my songs which I use f-bombs in the chours but in that I felt it nescescary, I might bring those on some time). Thank you.
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