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2003-08-30, 12:27
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The Mist That Shrouds Your Grave
this a song my band has......i didnt write them the drummer did
Under darkened funeral moon
Sodomy and necro lust
Moonshadows and Death
Upon your grave a cross
About to be defiled
My sword, And your blood
You'll Die, A second time
Satans orders will be done
Your soul will fall to hell...
(chorus)
The mist that shrouds your grave
The pale, Bloody mist
The mist that shrouds your grave
The mist of your blood
No one knows these atrocities
No one knows the horrors
Slain again by satans slave
In the mist that shrouds your grave
Behind blackened clouds
Moons and funeral shrouds
The forest whispers words
Beckoning to me
I exit the graveyard
You exit second life
Thrown back to the dead
I've never been more alive
The mist that shrouds your grave...
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2003-08-30, 15:57
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I am a tax on the world..
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Why'd you capitalize "You'll Die?"
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
 
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2003-08-30, 16:34
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Because, it's tough!
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2003-08-30, 16:54
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I want to hear real feedback about the lyrics...
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2003-08-30, 23:04
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I am a tax on the world..
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Quote:
Originally posted by Necro_Butcher
...real feedback...
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AAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
Fine. I don't like the chorus, and you didn't answer my question.
That's my feedback.
Quote:
Originally posted by Necro_Butcher
I exit the graveyard
You exit second life
Thrown back to the dead
I've never been more alive
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huh?
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2003-09-17, 00:37
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Id agree with powers on the chorus part
1. Doesn't seem to have the same creative feel of the entire song
2. I hate choruses in songs anyways but that's probably due to many years of death metal..
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