Ive got these pills...
And they make me feel... Ok...
But i just ..cant seem too take enough too...
Make you ...go away...

i struggle more everyday...
with this pain..
I just wish..things didnt always have to
be this way...

there never seems to be an end...
until ive swallowed my only friends...
but they never last... your memory ...
is still there in the end...

i thought i had it all...
you lifted me up and let me fall...

But im high now...
and you cant touch me...
no way for you to fuck me..

Cuz ive got these pills...
they make me feel...
ok...

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haha i made this up in this little box... bored.. kinda sucks ..but oh well...teen angst...

Yeah, but it wasn't bad. Your ideas flowed well. I caught the pauses when you wanted them . You kept to the theme and it was balanced. There was no threat in it just remorse. I don't think anyone is worth doing that for--been there, done that, wouldn't do it again-- but I can see what's coming across very well.

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