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2003-08-23, 16:22
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Senior Metalhead
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Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: canada
Posts: 114
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First song attempt
sup, first little song fraction i wrote, comments?
And the Flowers Slolwy turn From Dark Blue to a bleeding black,
alone with myself tonight i stab myself in the back.
Death staring back at me in the mirror of my face,
all the sins commited, all this pains disgrace.
walking in the shadows, i feel death creep near,
is it really the end? or i'm i paranoid with fear?
a deeper shade of black, a bloodier shade of red,
visions of the demons prancing through my head.
there's no net below to stop my fall, no hand to grab onto,
i'm falling even faster now, the ground i've broken through.
yeah thats it for now, any comments, critics etc. are welcome
-Matt
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They mostly come out at night...well...mostly
Keep it simple stupid
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