...tell me what you think,it's from one of our songs.Poems,lyrics,they all are the same to me,I use what I write for both of my songs and poems.This one is pig destroyer kind of music....anyway,check it out.

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Roses were falling through rain and thunder
as she drew me the map to Euphoria
with a trembling finger
through the dust on the floor


Abandon debris of a forgotten past
the ghost of a brutal truth
all around her
hungry fire in the background


a burnt-down church
a tearfull black sky
a well of sins
inside her troubled mind
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title still in doubt.......
it's part of a story,too bored to write it down,basically about a guy in search of who he thinks is the one trye love of his,and the things he sees/people he meets/shits he falls in as he goes.this is the smallest song about the story.

Give us more meat and taters. Not a bad start . The first verse I really liked a lot. Cool imagery.

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yeah,thanks.That's my style,you know,playing with images =) I try to say some things through them too,but mostly its images and feelings they create.I wish I had my whole works with me here but I don't,so it'll take some time till I post them again,this was the only part I remembered by heart...