This first song is my latest. If i finish it it will be a melodic death/old school thrash song (CoB/Hammerfall).

Dis Aliter Visum

Forth Coming Kings of the night
Ruthless Lords of the Darkened Lights
Soldiers of sadistic reign
Hedonist pigs now slain

Untold secrets in the mind of a man
tortured spirits, consumed by the land
Long awaited Vengance, an eye for an eye
The army has arrived


This next song is a sex/gore piece (Cann. Corpse style)

Fermented Vaginal Secretion

Mangled hymen, boils of pus on labia explode
Smell of rotted, critters crawl on hood, explore
Cunnilingus, venereal infection, pain indured
Spoiled fluids, gastric juices overflown

Fermented vaginal secretion
I loathe the cleanliness
Fermented vaginal secretion

Butchered vulva, patches of pubic hair singed
Anal reigion, dialated inch by inch
Bloody groin, masticated clitoris
Fatal penetration, ruptured lips



Should I finish these?

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Sounds tasty.

The frist one is very good, leave it alone.

The second one (in my opinion) needs a little something extra, but I don't really know what.

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I just had my pap test today. I'm so glad I didn't read this prior or I would have probably burst out laughing and would have had to explain why to my doctor ! That was funny ! You sick puppy. I could really see a bunch of guys headbanging and singing that. Definitely one to impress a lady on a first date.

The first one was pretty cool sounding though. I liked that.

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