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Old 2003-07-25, 23:02
Straker
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Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UK Newcastle
Posts: 64
Red face about the first american serial killer.....

It may sound like a cheesy titlle for a song, but there's logic behind it
I also updated dental torture, it reads better now i think, anyways, feedback appreciated guys


‘TORTURE CASTLE’

63rd Street Chicago, These will be your final quarters.
Bigamist, rapist, butcher, follow him to your death,
Your consent matters not, now your head leaks claret

Do not struggle,
It won’t be over soon.
Your flesh is exposed
Violated like a whore
Take it where you lay.
This is his castle of torture.

Now here you lie, raped, ravaged and molested.
Hemic and vaginal discharge douse the floor.
Now you are dragged, to the gas chamber you go.

Hauled through this maze.
Up the stairs of enigma.
Passed the rooms of torment
This one is yours.
Glass panel slammed shut.
This is your cubical of death.

The panic sets in, you are watched through glass.
Intake the vapour, the furnace roars your name.
The sight of you choke, sends him insane.

Down the chute you slide.
The disposal of your corpse.
Mutilated on the slab.
Organs removed from thorax.
In the furnace your hoisted
Tissue scorched from bones.

Your skeletal remains, extracted from the flame.
The trapdoor is unlocked, reveals a pit of powder,
In the lime you erode, like two hundred other fates.
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..............................................................................That night he drove to the graveyard and dug up her lifeless body, he then eagerly returned home, positioned the corpse in his bed, and after almost forty years of celibacy, thusly began his first intimate aquantence with the feamale gender. Gein found the corpse so sexually stimulating that he ended up eating parts of the body, and making a waistecoat of the skin, so he could wear it and become a woman whenever he wanted to .......................................................................................... ..........
 
Old 2003-07-26, 07:30
Alothrysis
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Join Date: Mar 2003
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Posts: 181
A lot better than Dental Torture, good DM writing, vocabulary could still go up but it's still good.
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Old 2003-07-26, 07:58
CarnivorousWind
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Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Darkest Depths of Hell
Posts: 474
Nice.
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Old 2003-07-26, 13:12
Straker
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Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UK Newcastle
Posts: 64
Thumbs up

cheers guys
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..............................................................................That night he drove to the graveyard and dug up her lifeless body, he then eagerly returned home, positioned the corpse in his bed, and after almost forty years of celibacy, thusly began his first intimate aquantence with the feamale gender. Gein found the corpse so sexually stimulating that he ended up eating parts of the body, and making a waistecoat of the skin, so he could wear it and become a woman whenever he wanted to .......................................................................................... ..........

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