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2003-07-19, 07:08
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Piercing Evil
Piercing Evil-
Under your skin, it see's through your eyes
Through your mind into your soul,
Makes you cry, makes you bleed,
A sacrafice, into your body.
From one to another, another is you.
"Why did this happen,
I didn't ask for this.
A quest of good, resulting evil?
It stays with me until i die,
'Til a hero blesses me,
'Til the curse is passed,
'Til defeat, i live in agony.
I try to hold back, the evil within,
stronger and stronger it grows on me."
Evil itself controls your body.
But you are not alone.
More is here,
and more to come.
Possesed by unfortune, powers unearthy,
You thrive for more power, you thrive to die.
"The Devil inside me can't hold back,
A second conscience,
one was enough.
Out of my head,
I must be dying.
Come hero, come."
From one to another, another is you.
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2003-07-19, 21:35
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
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I see you're a Metallica fan. I could here this like some of their pieces. I liked the way you brought the "From one to another, another is you" around to repeat at the end. It tied the tale together. Good thought pattern, too. Easily followed with some pretty good imagery. Nice.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2003-07-19, 21:51
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yay lol
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2003-07-20, 00:32
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Senior Metalhead
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A lot of similarities to Metallica's style, pretty good
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Jesus saves because he shops at Walmart
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2003-07-21, 02:41
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lol i wrote it while listening to megadeth but there not all that different (1000 Times Goodbye)
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2003-07-21, 15:05
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bugfucker strikes back.
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Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: 19713, Delaware
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If only i could write... Nice song.
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The one time I go to check this thread, it mentions me getting fucked by a dude.
Awesome.
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2003-07-22, 02:35
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just apply lyrics to your life, like music, video games, and whatnot... pictures cartoons lol
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