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Just a quick idea

2003-07-19, 01:38

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Just a quick idea

Dunno, just been playing around with a few ideas for lyrics, and I figure I would have some fun posting my own up for the moment.

A fallen angel that had nothing
A scarred heart left bleeding
If I have no soul
Then why do these tears fall?

I'll wreck it all
Wreck all creation
Why do these tears fall?
What is this sensation?

Wings broken and torn
Tears that were pain born
A hatred that consumes me
And left me nothing.

I'll wreck it all
Wreck all of creation
Why do these tears fall?
What is this sensation?

I feel so confused
I feel so helpless
I'll lash it out on you
Because nothing else will do

I feel burried
I feel dead
I'll lash it on myself
And now you'll watch my wings bleed

I'll wreck it all
Wreck all of creation
Why do these tears fall?
What is this sensation?

I'll wreck it all
Wreck all of creation
Why do these tears fall?
What is this sensation?

...You left me alone to die.

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2003-07-19, 04:50

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sounds like something slayerlike...in style

i guess it's pretty cool...

"A fallen angel that had nothing
A scarred heart left bleeding
If I have no soul
Then why do these tears fall?"

i like this, and you need a title.

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2003-07-19, 07:13

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sounds like iron maiden, probably because they have a song called the fallen angel off of their brave new world cd

2003-07-19, 21:38

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It sounded like I was being spoken to. I liked that a lot. I had great imagery going from your details, too. Good tone setting. I liked it. It was like I was there listening.

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