THis is about one of my freinds, and what he hopes to see when he dies. And just thought it would be a cool setting for a song.....


Dissending Realm

Into the Caverns of darkness
He creeps silently into the night
Once dead now awoken
In the place of another reality
Long awaited, And sacrificed
Emerging to a throne
Waiting for his masters arrival

As far as the eye can see
A wonderful place of imagery
Flames give birth to Women now his
Knowing now, this is what hell is

a lustful scene of debachury
Soldiers, Maidens, Pesants of the damned
Leutinenant to the unholy land
Side by side with lord Lucifer

Armor, Weapons, Forger of death
Legions swept through holy clans
Leaveing nothing, But shreded men
Now it is time, for this age to dissend

Bronze age of hell
Mascurade of Disseption
Jesus now dissected
Laing on an altar
DIIEEEE bladujbeflgkbnrgujn






LOL ok the end was not seriose at all, ha ha
But yea that Goes out to Decease Of Divinity
The Time will come my brother, Two powers of our darkness combined,WE WILL TEAR ARE ENEMYS TO SHREDS!!!!!!!
See ya soon dude

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The time will be soon.

good lyrics except for last verse

revise it. i like it, but i think it should be worded more
evily, NOT SATANIC, but evily. i don't think it's " "
enough.

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Cool sounding, sounds Immolation-ish to me if there weren't so many references to hell, not that that's bad. Don't use so many direct words involving Satan and Hell, instead try to word it up a bit by using metaphors, dictionary, etc.

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i thought that was deadly awesome lyrics, the second verse was put together good i liked it

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Yeah, definitely shitcan that last verse. If you could come up with all that imagery in the rest of it you shouldn't have a problem with an ending. You may want to bring more into the storyline though. It seems to be a backdrop for something else. And for some reason it seems like an old b/w silent movie. (I dunno how my mind works sometimes. maybe it isn't !!)

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revise it. i like it, but i think it should be worded more
evily, NOT SATANIC, but evily. i don't think it's " "
enough.


Power, this is the second time you have Commented on my "SATANIC" writeing, and im convinced you dont know what your talking about.. This song wasnt SATANIC, it was just a poem..And my Satanist song, I dont care if you dont SEE how it relates to me being a satanist.. because satanism is what you want it to be..Have it be Old Pagan Witchery, following Anton laveys "prophecys" or Philosephy. But i think if your going to Call something NOT Satanic, just dont say it, unless you know what your talkin about.

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lookit, dick...i didn't say it was satanic. i said
"I DON'T THINK IT"S EVIL ENOUGH"
got it maybe i was thinking different than what i was writing...
but IMO evil is not the devil, evil is imagery.

i said i liked it, and after the second paragragh,
i didn't like it as much. the first two paragraghs--->cool.

yo.

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