This is just a Stupid atempt at a black metal song, here it goes

WORSHIPING SACRIFICE

Here now the altar is laid
Bring in the whench
Wich hence shall be slain
Preserved for the beast
Lay down the Virgin maid

Untainted by Mans touch
Corupted by the blade
Slit through the neck
Watching as her glimps fades

Dawn upon the holy
we've taken there loved
Picked to be the chosen ones
Fearfully running
Trampling there brave
No one to protect them
Pride turned to dust, in the flame

Worshiping Sacrifice
Once surronded by light
Now entombed in the wreaking shadows
Worshiping sacrifice
Once so holy and brave
Now dead by the covenants blade

Come Blood moon
Harvesting death
Sweeping through peacful villages
Tracking another one
Impregnate the virgin mary
To give birth to Satans son

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this piece is pretty cool

the rest sucks indeed

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yeh i agree with doctor, first time ever. that verse is the only good one rest sucks

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Maybe it's cuz I'm old , but the ole virgin thing is just so lame to me. Whether it be a person or the Virgin Mary. (And I'm a Christian, but that doesn't affect my opinions-usually.) The virgin thing usually drops it down into a teen-shock song. And not much shocks me anymore. I look for an interesting storyline in pieces. Something differnt from the norm. And I'll have to admit I haven't read a whole lot of black metal lyrics so that's something I'll have to peruse. That's probably why mine are so bad so that's something I'll have to look into.

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Sounds cool for Black Metal.

L,B', if you research black metal songs, you'll probobly only find slightly immature lyrics. Thats really what black metal is but its cool when you're really pissed off in my opinion. Or if you want to get pissed off...

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I know it gets the adrenline pumping for Wally cuz whenever he'd run on the treadmill or workout he'd be blasting it. Even though some of the lyrics I can't understand audibly, most of the music is very good. It has more of a 'theatrical classical ' feel if that makes sense. Maybe more thougtfully done and not just a rhythm and melody.
Not too much pisses me off. I'm easy to get along with. But sometimes if I am I like a slammin' song !