This is Just pretty much a Doom Song........I dont listen to Doom Metal much but, Here we go....



Eternal Winter

Bombs Impaleing the sky
Flashes of Burning Pheonix
Obliterateing the ground Below
Life short lived
Ended in a Holocaust
Boiling Oceans, A sea of Red
Ripping through the ozone over head.

Eternal winter
Remenencse of liveing Beings
deformed, Fornicated by War
With a Future with no peace
With Hatred filling the air
Atomic weapons released
Ground rumbles with despair

One final Judgment day
Quakes
Warheads
Bombs turning Night to day

Eternal winter
Death stalking slowly
During the Aftermath
FORNICATED BY WAR
No one shall live through
ETERNAL WINTER

Exsistence Decease
Evaporateing Excistence
Freezing Fertile Soil
Great ending to a dying humanity
Eternal winter

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"Exsistence Decease
Evaporateing Excistence"

Those were the only lines I didn't really care for. The repetition didn't work for me. SOmetimes it does , but in this case it didn't. The rest I felt had a hard edged feel which I liked. The subject matter was very dooming, but your imagery was cool.

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