I got some Comments about a song i made, so i improved it, i appreciated the comments, although they did disapoint me soo here is the better version.
Golden Palace Of lust
I Awoke in a place.
Far away i could tell
Caught in a land of my own creation
Scared But assured, i was home now.
Seemed as if it were an ancient time.
I wandered what seemed like
A Square of some sort.
I turned to look,
To See a mistress Whispering to me
You have been expected
we must go now.
(Chorus)
Caught in a dream
My home now
Of a place so Great
GOLDEN PALACE OF LUCIFER
Not in a spell, this is reality
GOLDEN PALACE OF LUST
The sun was Black as the sky above
I followed the mistress to a Golden Temple
I felt a warm flow inside
Redeeming me, welcoming me.
The structre was mamoth
It Was almost catching the stars
Surronded by gargoyles
She elegently Strode upon golden steps.
(chorus)
As we entered the Shrine
I was
Felt something come over me.
I felt like an animal, As we got deeper
The Halls were of gold
And marble floor.
Sculptures of great demons surronded me.
The Blood flowed like wine
From a Fountain, i had to Drink.
The mistress took me
And Seduced me,
i gave in to temptation
Iam finally free
I understand this place Now
I'am in hell.
last (chorus)
I came To a dark room.
A horned figure in the shadows.
He was on a Golden Throne
He said unto me.
We have won the war.
A war in itself, helped to create.
We celebrated life, as i know it now.
In to the Darkness.
Into The Golden Palace of lust.
(Mind you this is Pretty much just a poem.)
yyyeahhhhh.
