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2003-06-13, 20:38
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Master Killer
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Sunset Forever
Finally a new one, heh haven't had much time to do lyrics on the side but school's kinda finished for me, I had some words of this one lying around and I finished it this week,
Sunset Forever
No one knows, no one understands the mysteries that will become us
Life and death as a circle, the start and the end!
The sun and the moon will become as horizons fade into timeless seasons
Words of wisdom once spoken, oppositions shattered yet unbroken.
Sunset Forever embrace the dark!
Travel throughout your destiny, arriving in a place you'll never see
And when the sun freezes over and when the heart stops in our chest
Our teeth will split and our tongue rots in our mouth
Watch me fall and watch me grow
The valued seed will blossom once more and spread the blood forever
The past sprouts forth memories as bitter as the taste of our enemies
Only a vould stench of shriveled remains, we look towards the horizons
and watch our beloved fade away...
Yeah, it's kinda deep and not to the point but I like this song this way somehow, maybe not all to straight forward but a bit more complicated.
tell me what you guys think about it.
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2003-06-13, 21:46
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Personally, I liked it.
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2003-06-14, 21:11
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I am a tax on the world..
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
 
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Last edited by powersofterror : 2003-06-14 at 21:14.
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2003-06-14, 21:12
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I am a tax on the world..
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you're right, you never got to the point.
it was over before it started to get into something...
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2003-06-14, 21:41
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I liked it, very vague but for some songs that works, as in this one I think it went well. The only thing I don't like is the layout. For me at least I can't sing whole sentences that are gramatically correct. I like shorter phrases but that's just my singing style....
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2003-06-15, 06:57
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Master Killer
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Yeah, I was thinking about using long screams and death metal growls and shit...
I dunno, it's not really anything like my normal work. guess I'm back to the *brutal* drawing board.
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