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Mind of darkness

2003-06-04, 06:06

dan

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Mind of darkness

Darkness is near, i can feel it....
it fills the sky with its beatiful tears of blood
while our souls fade away into the Abyss of the Unknown.....

i will finish it later...i need to get a hit!

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Last edited by dan : 2003-06-04 at 06:10.

2003-06-04, 08:23

Def

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woah three lines of words, how long did they take you?

don't bother posting a couple of words, post full songs instead.

cunt.

2003-06-04, 18:51

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He's right, this isnt 'Poetry/Lyrical Fragments.' It's funny, though, that you have a title without having written anything.

As for criticism: I hope it goes somewhere else, quickly.

2003-06-05, 05:24

deMANUfacture

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i think it would be even better if u deleted it........

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2003-06-07, 19:59

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or you guys could dontinue it an dsee where it goes. We do that at my forum sometimes and it gets pretty good sometimes.

I fall.
Darkness penetrates like worms into each hair upon my head
And the crimson drips and crusts clinging to my body
Crying from the eyes of those before me

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