the name is only temporary untill somethink better comes to mind

"A dead issue"

You always left one door to take me in
Even with your eye’s that feel remorse.
I left you drowning in a river of my thoughts
Not knowing I was the one you sought.

And when the sun didn’t shine
I was worried that you wouldn’t be mine.
My emotions are somewhat a dead issue
But you always helped me wrestle with it.

You said I was number one
Yet it always felt like I was last in line.
But you always knew if your walls came down
I would always be around

your thoughts please

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I liked this quite a bit. THe only thing I thought was the actual idea of wrestling a dead issue. To me a dead issue would be a limp dishrag sort of thing and that wouldn't be hard to toss around. But the rest of the song had a good flow to it and was very enjoyable reading storywise. One of the things that I found appealing was the subtle psychological bits throughout. Nice job.







( pst....heehee... Walpurgis and Stephy next weekend....... BUT MOTHER WILL BE THERE !! )

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thanxs for your reply, i wrote this one pretty quick but lots of thought went into it, i tried to write it personal but still so people could relate to it...........i will try n write more

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Word to that fucker