I've heard of slow moving threads but this is crazy. Is this a death metal place or a dead place !? Come on you guys. Aren't you pissed about something or have an issue with something ?? Isn't there a love in your life that makes your knees weak?
WAAAAAAAKE UUUUUUPPPPPPPP !!!!!!!!!!!

thank you
(I hope you know I was kidding .)

Here's a piece I just popped off a few minutes ago. Comments appreciated.....I don't like being so alone here .

"Waiting"

As the strings play she's sitting and wondering
If he's thinking of her, too.
A smile borrowed from Da Vinci.
It touches her heart
Knowing that there's someone, ah, someone
Someone special waiting out there.
He knows that hidden soul inside.
Kindred spirits high in the clouds.

She's waiting-
And he's waiting.
Maybe waiting for a tomorrow that may never come.
But maybe, maybe, no one knows

Just knowing someone understands her so well.
Trust in each other.
A new friend, a deeper age in time.
Just knowing, ah, knowing.
There's amazing things on this earth, she knows,
And dreamer that she is, she always hopes -
Someway, somehow
She can put her arms around him -
Just to let him know how much she cares.

She's waiting-
And he's waiting.
Maybe waiting for a tomorrow that may never come.
But maybe, maybe, no one knows.

BJH

Thanks for reading.

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Anyways, I liked the 'chorus'.

"Kindred spirits high in the clouds." seemed to fit the mood , but not the song.

And to the Vincent reference, were you talking about a painting by him... ?

The line you referred to has some personal meaning to it so that's why it's included, but I'm not sure why you don't think it fits.
And you know what ? I messed up on the artist so I'm gonna change that right now ! I got the wrong one. Oops ! I didn't think that sounded right. I was referring to the Mona Lisa.







for Bobpurgis !

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I liked it.

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its boring i thought it was gonna be death metal

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Sorry, if I threw ya. I s'pose it could be done like Crowbar did "Dream Weaver" . Not really meant for that, but it's an idea !!

But I like all kinds of music. It keeps me from gettin' old. Maybe I'll attempt another metal song soon. I've done a couple that weren't bad. That was before I came here.

Glad some liked it though.....and I'm glad there's still life here !

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