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Old 2003-04-22, 00:54
xDarkestHourx
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My Triumphant Fucking Return

yeah, so my bitch ass is back. Good times. These are all either grind/math-hardcore or brutal, slow doom/emo-core (emo, I know. When I say that I mean A Jealousy Issue and not New Found Glory). Now on to the lyrics.

Pressure Can Either Bust A Pipe Of Make A Diamond

Carry my steak knife
As he spits on your face, slaps your flesh
Bent over crying with a cock in you
Tears pooling wide enough to see your red reflection

I am the exile
Bootfucking his face
After the door comes down
A vigorous race

Other men come to your aid
Men in blue PD uniforms
Removing my foot from the pulp of his head
They're too late, he's fucking dead

<|_|n75

I love how the finer things in life seem just out of reach
Like you, my dear, sitting in your room, staring at the ceiling
On your bed imagining my likeness plastered across the tiles
You just can't seem to let go of him, to move on
Maybe things will turn out better this way

Who the hell am I kidding?
In fantasies I'm all you could ask for
But there's nothing like the real thing

Flight Isn't Always Beautiful

"I see a spotlight ahead"
That's what she always said
As we came to the crossroads

"I feel something's different now
But I can't quite explain how"
As I slammed on my brakes on the road to perfection

Swiped from the side
Romance died
As I learned how to fly
Out the front of a windshield

She cried out my name
Trite, in vain
For she'd already lost me

Eyes fixed in a vacant stare
A look pricless and rare
Extorted shock upon her face

It's ok, Everything's fine
The other driver's, next in line
For her

She knew romance
She knew what I had to give, the card up my sleeve
The bludgeoning essence that makes me bleed


Cheers,
xx
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Old 2003-04-22, 01:43
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I enjoyed the last song.
 
Old 2003-04-22, 08:07
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great return x-boy, I liked the first and the last one, but this sentence from the first one ruled them all:

Eyes fixed in a vacant stare
A look pricless and rare
Extorted shock upon her face


great stuff, once again
 
Old 2003-04-22, 10:33
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the first one fucking kicks!
especcially:
Removing my foot from the pulp of his head
They're too late, he's fucking dead


awesome!
 
Old 2003-04-22, 11:10
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The first one, however blatant, was pretty darn good. But I liked the last two the best. I love the first title though.
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Old 2003-04-23, 01:21
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the second one fuckin was awesome man, if u dont mind i would love to use dat in one of my songs, only if thats alright with U
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Old 2003-04-23, 01:36
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this is for deMANufacture. If you're referring to "<|_|n75" you can use it as long as I get a credit mention. Just a simple "Lyrics: Daniel Shroyer" would be rad. Or if you add stuff to it "Daniel Shroyer and (Insert Name Here)". That'd be pretty cool actually.

Cheers,
xx
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Old 2003-04-23, 12:59
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man theres some fuken awesome lyrics in there. the endings to the first and second song r kool as
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Old 2003-04-24, 00:05
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The first one was a little too......I dunno, it was more funny, especially the "cock in you" line. However, the second and third ones are probably the best lyrics I've seen in this forum, really really cool, I'm impressed.
 
Old 2003-04-24, 06:09
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Quote:
Originally posted by xDarkestHourx
this is for deMANufacture. If you're referring to "<|_|n75" you can use it as long as I get a credit mention. Just a simple "Lyrics: Daniel Shroyer" would be rad. Or if you add stuff to it "Daniel Shroyer and (Insert Name Here)". That'd be pretty cool actually.

Cheers,
xx


kool man, its a done deal than, i will give credit to u before i play it..........
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Old 2003-05-22, 17:24
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what r u people talking about , those were awful , they were totally obvious and unintelligent , and crap. the same thing has been done by a million bands befoe but better i dont understand what u r getting excited over. as much as i like gore grind the lyrics dont tend to be very good but urs are espescially embarassingly bad , i was cringing as i read them
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