I was thinking of starting this out with the chorus at the beginning, but I wondered if that was such a good idea or not. Input from you would be helpful. Thanks. And thanks for reading.


"I Never Learn"

I go beyond this world
Because its not here that you dwell.
I know clouds of heaven hold you
While I wait in hell.

I can see your eyes.
They see what's beyond-
The fruitless life I live
Since I know you've gone.

Synergy unbound.
You gripped me in your palm.
My mouth opens in silence
As I sing a muted song.

(chorus)
Your kiss like fire.
A touch that burns.
Enraptured, trapped in wanting.
But I never learn.
I never learn.

Like from new pools in the deep forest,
I drank from the springs of your soul
I reached out and touched you
And I felt I was made whole.

(chorus)
Your kiss like fire.
A touch that burns.
Enraptured, trapped in wanting.
But I never learn.
I never learn.

Your kiss like fire.
A touch that burns
I'm helpless to your love.
But I'll never learn.
I really don't want to ever learn.

BJH

The fruitless live I live was supposed to be The fruitless life I live, right?

nice, it's great to see you can write serious stuff too, heh, I liked the chorus and this verse:

Like from new pools in the deep forest,
I drank from the springs of your soul
I reached out and touched you
And I felt I was made whole.

it's neat, and it has imagination.

good going, keep it up!

Thanks ! Yeah, I fixed that word.
I write all kinds of stuff. I'm glad you liked this. And remember many clowns hide frowns. You never know, but I am crazy, too. Ask Wally.
Thanks again.

that was good man, i appreciated it. the chorus is very good,I can see your eyes.
They see what's beyond-
The fruitless life I live
Since I know you've gone.

and that verse i like

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