This is a song from a band I was in-

Christ and his lies

"Your the chosen by god
And now your the chosen one by us
It won't hurt but you'll bleed a lot
Sorry for the sins, do you care if I cuss?
Fuck you Christ,
You'll be crucified in Satanic ways!
Fuck your lies
I can't wait to see you die for the third time!

Fuck you Christ,
Your reign of bullshit has ended
We killed your light
We leave you in a pentagram burned and pinned
You have been crucified by us
A rogue death because you sinned
I'm sure your followers will stop giving you trust
I'm sure your followers will give you sex and lust

In our minds you are dead
And soon in their minds too,
When they find out the truth they'll stop giving you head
It's alright, We'll cut off your cock and feed it to you
You don't mean shit to us
I want to see you cry laying in a river of blood
Your lies are gone and done
I saw Christ in an orgy of nuns!


I saw heaven myself and it's not pretty
There's priests and nuns molesting themselves and one another
A holy Orgy with the angels and God, it's dirty
It's a sick truth you want to smuther!"

Pretty good... not evil enough for me though.... keep it up

i think religion is a waste of time,
but i must say, you suck.

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Just seemed like mashed together ideas with no flow. If I was offended I would make a comment on that , but it's your piece, not mine. It just seemed pretty Jr. High to me.

we're too ignorant to judge religion, so yeah.

The first two lines made it sound actually rather promising, but after that, it got entirely too predictable and unimaginative.

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im gunna have to agree with walpurgis on this one

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That line made me laugh. I thought the first verse was okay, but then potential was quickly denied.

yeah too much fuct up grammar... seems very unorganized... but the actual content is okay...

Exactly my thought too. This is worse than Deicide's stangnant and predictable lyrics.

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well, as you can tell i didn't exactly spend any time on this, I might try
to just redo it, cause it does kinda suck.

is this even worse than mine?

nah

okay good. i was getting worried there for a second.

just do what your sig sez, and you'll be writing kickass lyrics in no time.

damn straight

Its fucking gay man, you are a try hard who thinks he is bad for woshipping Satan, and you think you will make friends who like metal by preaching your idiotic ways.

Fool.

if u play guitar stick to it i dont think ur trade is writing lyrics, u seemed to like giving christ shit but wat r u trying to prove. satanic blessings do not go to u

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Go Fuck yourself! You don't know shit about me.
"...and you think you will make friends who like metal by preaching your
idiotic ways."

That is the stupidist motherfucking thing I've ever heard.

Nah, I think warnevere has a point here, these lyrics where pretty crappy, just yelling jezus must rot and satan reigns is just pure LAME, and on the other hand it gives you crappy lyrics, like you've seen on display.

and no, you're not evil if you worship satan haha, if you think you're badass for worshipping satan, you're just a lame guy who smells like something that starts with a P and ends with oserfag.

hahaha, looks like u loose filthygod, warnerve paid out on u for good reason, lyrics were shit and knowbody gives fuck bout how much u hate jesus, you cant disagree cause even def-fx think they shit and he awesome at lyrics, so too bad dude

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correct me if im wrong, but someone earlier in this thread said that
it was kinda junior highish, but I think calling someone a poserfag
seems more junior highish to me. I rather use more explicit language,
Fuckin Cunt.

Ow, I'm so scared now, mister evil satanic guy, excuse me for that, my english vocabulary isn't that big.

cunt, what a big grown up word for such a little guy like you

am i more mature?!?!?!
pleasssssssssse!?!?

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what i dont get is...you extremely "satanic" people...why do you have such a problem with christians? and why the fuck do you feel the need to rip books apart and set fire to churches? its not like youre stopping the spread of the religion by getting rid of the material aspects of it. as much as i disagree with christianity, the religions in their minds, not in their wood buildings. oh yea, and some how i dont think guys with swords and white make up will scare people into dropping their religion. "christ and his lies" wtf...lies? he spent his life preaching about how to be good to each other...soooo....we shouldnt be good to each other, or something?

no, we should all go out and kill ourselves and torch churches etc..

I don't care about religion that much, but bashing it in lyrics is just lame, and for this purpose, it just sucks, it's just an image thing, start up a 9 man band and paint pentagrams on your foreheads, that would be badass

Burning books and churches is fuckin retarded... i would have to liken you to nazi germany... i mean people are going to belive what ever they want...either in secret or openly.... as for the lyrics... im not going to hate on them... some people may not like them..but fuck maybe someone will... who the fuck are you to judge... if you dont like it..dont read it...dont listen to it and shut the fuck up...

some of it is prety good but you cross the line of intelligence and stupidity by swearing so much.I'm all for burning the bible i'm a satinist myself but you did a bad job

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Maybe you guys should take a look at the same Book bobpurgis has read so at least you know what the HELL you're talking about !! Yup, you read right. He has his own ideas , but at least he's intelligent about his religious conversations. And his mommy was a Sunday School teacher before her job required her to work Sunday mornings.

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If you post your lyrics on a website, it's asking for them to be judged by other people. If someone has the balls to bash God and be truly evil and satanic but can't take shit for what they've written, then they should shut the fuck up in the first place.