I wouldn't want anyone to think I only write goofy stuff so here's a little something for you to rip if you want to. Opinions and other ideas welcome. Thanks.

"Vices"

Back in the grind
Same old routine
Thought it was gone
But it still follows me

A day at a time
Tired, and I cry
My own hand deceives me
And I don't believe my own alibies

Put it off til tomorrow
Just one more day
If I could change my life
I know it would go away

(Chorus)
I know myself better
I know its not me
I know it's my downfall
I know what I believe

So quick to disappoint
So quick to change my mind
Not a problem to you
But I just don't feel right

I don't feel the same
I used to feel like you do
It was no big deal
Til I opened my eyes and realized
That's when part of my life died

(Chorus)
I know myself better
I know its not me
I know it's my downfall
I know what I believe

It's happened before
So many times
But I keep it up
Making myself believe in their lies

BJH

hey this is actually pretty good, but I don't like the chorus that much, and I do see the emotion but not the point in the lyrics.