Hello, im new here to metaltabs. (First Post). Quick intro: I'm 18 years old, and I want to be the best screamer that I can be. I've picked up the fry scream technique and been practicing it for about 7 months now.

I have 2 recordings that I'd like some feedback on. Both are simple recordings (no instruments) Please give me some tips to improve myself. That's all i want.

Both songs are by everytime i die

http://www.mediafire.com/?sm1f78dau8bn3cu

http://www.mediafire.com/?sofmgzeg959xbpj