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Old 2011-04-29, 19:31
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Sometimes it isn't enough to know you'll die,
But most of the time it is.
But on those times when it isn't,
(Which, being honest, is when I'm drunk out of my skull.)
I think to myself how truly awful I am,
And how much worse than you I am for even attempting to justify feelings like this to myself,
I am infinitely worse than you'll ever imagine.
If only I'd say this to your face.

And then there's you,
Strange person reading this on some forum while drinking tea or farting.
Here is somebody pouring theirselves onto your monitor page and for what?
I don't even know.
All I know is that I'm not right in the head.
Is this even poetry?
Old 2011-04-30, 07:54
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0o0o, I liked this! I like being drawn into a piece and then having it stare back at me.
My eldest son's bipolar website:

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!

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