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2003-03-24, 00:54

Venom

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heres somshit i was fucking around with not done though

*grunted*
alone in the park two lovers holding hands from the
bushs his demon curse he spreads butchers the girl leaves the guy for dead

he wakes up next to a bloodymess organs everywere and a ripped up dress*grunted*

his body is healed nothing can describe the pain that he feels *grunted*

he takes her wedding banddddd he looks at his handdddd therrrrr isss a *screamed*pentagraaammm*screamed*

EDITED

*grunted*
alone in the park two lovers holding hands from the
bushs his demon curse he spreads butchers the girl leaves the guy for dead

*grunted*
every full moon is now a nother ones doom months go by now he takes pride
now he kills for his own needs his new taste children he now feeds*grunted*

*grunted*
alone in the park two lovers holding hands from the
bushs his demon curse he spreads butchers the girl leaves the guy for dead

meh i think most of it sucks but ther are some good parts i need to work on my lyrics i some times just get my other bandmates to help with lyrics

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*grunts*FUCK THIS WORLD FUCK SHITKNOT FUCK EVERY THING THAT THEY STAND FOR DONT BE FOOLED DONT GIVE A FUCK JUST QUIT FUCKN POSING

I WRAPPED MY HANDS AROUND HER NECK SQUEEZING OUT HER BREATH EYES ROLLED BACK IN HER HEAD CLAWING AT MY SKIN ALL I KNOW IT'S NOT MY FAULT SHE WAS ASKING FOR IT!!

Last edited by Venom : 2003-03-25 at 19:57.

2003-03-25, 19:58

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wow no comments i was waiting to get stoned

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*grunts*FUCK THIS WORLD FUCK SHITKNOT FUCK EVERY THING THAT THEY STAND FOR DONT BE FOOLED DONT GIVE A FUCK JUST QUIT FUCKN POSING

I WRAPPED MY HANDS AROUND HER NECK SQUEEZING OUT HER BREATH EYES ROLLED BACK IN HER HEAD CLAWING AT MY SKIN ALL I KNOW IT'S NOT MY FAULT SHE WAS ASKING FOR IT!!

2003-03-26, 22:05

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*stuffs rock into your throat*
"okay."

i think it's kinda gay.
like bark at the moon, warewolf gay.

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2003-03-26, 22:08

Venom

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yes my first put down come on ppl keep them coming this is how i got better at guitar

lol bark at the moon is were i got the idea for it

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*grunts*FUCK THIS WORLD FUCK SHITKNOT FUCK EVERY THING THAT THEY STAND FOR DONT BE FOOLED DONT GIVE A FUCK JUST QUIT FUCKN POSING

I WRAPPED MY HANDS AROUND HER NECK SQUEEZING OUT HER BREATH EYES ROLLED BACK IN HER HEAD CLAWING AT MY SKIN ALL I KNOW IT'S NOT MY FAULT SHE WAS ASKING FOR IT!!

2003-03-27, 09:35

deMANUfacture

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i just think its shit

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2003-03-27, 10:50

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haha fuk yeh where u come up with that shit, sorry to tell u dude but u suck

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2003-03-27, 16:29

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man thats no prob i've only writen afew songs and trust me ther getting better hmm i think i'm like the elton john of death metal amzing voice shit lyrics but with out the whole faggot bit

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*grunts*FUCK THIS WORLD FUCK SHITKNOT FUCK EVERY THING THAT THEY STAND FOR DONT BE FOOLED DONT GIVE A FUCK JUST QUIT FUCKN POSING

I WRAPPED MY HANDS AROUND HER NECK SQUEEZING OUT HER BREATH EYES ROLLED BACK IN HER HEAD CLAWING AT MY SKIN ALL I KNOW IT'S NOT MY FAULT SHE WAS ASKING FOR IT!!

2003-03-28, 17:08

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I think you need to put commas(familiar with these guys? , ) in or indent because I spent most of my time trying to make sense of this song. For example, when you said, "butchers the girl leaves the guy for dead" I thought you were talking about the girl being a dead guy- and earilier I thought the guy was a demon.

But
"alone in the park two lovers holding hands from the
bushs his demon curse he spreads butchers the girl leaves the guy for dead"
was the only part I liked from the whole song(after I made sense of it). Nice try.

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