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Old 2010-05-11, 22:56
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Okay, this is really lame I know. I'm playing after reading a Carcass lyric. I do like the second part better than the first, but this was just a spontaneous write.


Let me tape your eyelids to the top of your head
So you can see exactly what I'm doing
An octopuses tentacle is wet with your saliva
I don't want obstructions in your viewing
I heard you like fish sushi so I brought it just for you
So eat it and don't worry about the odor

Let me make you comfortable
A pillow for your head
Just watch that those strong claws
Don't turn your ears into shreds
Baffling selfmade screams
With your own blood in your ears
I only want you comfortable, my dear

My eldest son's bipolar website:

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!

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