Invading the Already Dead

When the night falls,
The alarum calls.
Invasion is what we wait for.

We gave you your chance.
Your time is up.
We are out to get you.

We launch our attack.
There is no striking back.
How will you fight for your lives?

Protect your mind.
Protect your soul.
Protect all that is true.
Fight for your rights.
Fight for your freedom.
Fight for the children at home.

Nothing will stop us.
Nothing will help.
You are as good as dead.

Make your plans.
Defend yourself.
Call for allies to help.

We’re out to get you.
Our odds are great.
Yours are zero to none.

We fly our flags,
Into the night.
We’ll accept nothing but victory.

Protect your mind.
Protect your soul.
Protect all that is true.
Fight for your rights.
Fight for your freedom.
Fight for the children at home.

Nothing will stop us.
Nothing will help.
You are as good as dead.

(First song I ever wrote, lyrics anyway)

To patriotic for my taste.

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too patriotic wtf is wrong with u... oh, i see. you would rather hear a song about a kid humping a dog.

First of it, its a bear. And if I wanted to hear patriatism, I would go listen to Arron Carter. You could at least put some symbolism in it, make the listener think. I just stated my opinion that you asked for, so don't get all upset. Not everone is going to like you.

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Tell's it right like it is. Straightforward, not full of metaphors and all the other bullshit. I like it.

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cool thx for that comment.
Also, where did it say i wanted YOUR oppinion.

He has the right to criticize it as much as you have to right to write it. If you dont want people's opinions dont put it where they can see. Also, he said he didnt like it, and you insult him. Not cool. Calm down, not everyone has to like it. Quit your bitching.

I agree with Darko, I didn't like it. A little too straightfoward, which is okay, except when it is a common theme. It needs to be more original so it stands out more.

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yeah to patriotic, i really didnt like it

get off the war theme and u mite get a more positive response

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i say fuck patriotic, the best govt. is self govt.
learn it, use it.

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reminds me of bruce springsteen.

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the song was about the war, "war inspiration thead," i wrote it while watching the news. its not like im in a band so its never gonna be heard. and im sry darko for makking fun of ur bear humping thingy and abusing ur opinion. (was that bruce springsteen comment a good comment?")

well depends, bruce always sang bout growin up in amreica and how great the country was, he was very patriotic................. this equalled boring for lots people not from america

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no, im sorry, but sounding like bruce springsteen is a bad comment. I'm disgraced to be from NJ because of his sorry ass, infact, if i ever met him, i'd shove a flag in both his ears till his eyes pop out and brain gushes through, and then i'd throw him on a boat to antartica.

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i dont even understand why u think its patriotic. the song could be about something else if i took out this verse.

We fly our flags,
Into the night.
We’ll accept nothing but victory.

Springsteen ? Hardly. I'm a fan of his and I don't think so.
But I thought it was pretty good due to the straight-forwardness. Some things need to be metaphorical and some don't. A little in-your-face is good for you. I thought the flow was very good to this ideawise as well as the way it reads.

i think its a alrite song but nothing special and it dont sound like bruce springsteen either

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for the first time it's really cool, i like it, with some good music under it it should rock

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