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just a lil somethin somethin

2003-03-19, 23:10

SinThetIc

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just a lil somethin somethin

Some people say that ive got too change my ways...
They say the end is near and that i will tremble in fear when God is here...
But i dont see whats wrong with not adhereing to every word a dead man said...

I see the preacher at church standing Hollow but proud in front of the sunday crowd...
I see the preacher at night with a women i know is not his wife...

Sometimes i wonder who the evil one really is...

They told me since i was just a child i have too read the bible...
I never did seem too understand their reasons...
But i always knew id never understand the meaning...

Too be continued

2003-03-21, 07:34

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2003-03-21, 20:35

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2003-03-26, 02:57

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2003-03-29, 22:12

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Since you have some ideas and a bit of a pattern I wouldn't consider this a finished piece, but an outline to use to add and subtract parts to perfect it more and give it some sparkle. I don't know if you were going to put this to music or not, but I took the liberty of rearranging it a bit. I HATE it when the meaning is changed though so I try to leave the 'guts' in other's works. It may give you some ideas anyway. I purposely left the first 3 lines repeated because I think that could be turned into a chorus if you'd want to. What are your thoughts?

They told me since i was just a child i have too read the bible...
I never did seem too understand their reasons...
But i always knew id never understand the meaning...

Some people say that ive got too change my ways...
They say the end is near and that i will tremble in fear when God is here...
But i dont see whats wrong with not adhereing to every word a dead man said...

I see the preacher at church standing Hollow but proud in front of the sunday crowd...
I see the preacher at night with a women i know is not his wife...
Sometimes i wonder who the evil one really is...

They told me since i was just a child i have too read the bible...
I never did seem too understand their reasons...
But i always knew id never understand the meaning...

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