well here's some new one's for you guys, nothing special...just more of the usual

"My Counselor Said I Have Anger Issues, So I Told Him I'd Shit In His Mailbox If He Didn't Stop Talking"

Leaves in fall bleed red on the landscape
Flowing out from beneath green skin to turn brown and die
The gradual degeneration of a horizon into death
My mind paying tracks, mimicking my surroundings

My feelings slowly curl up, whither, and fall away
There's really no point in me staying here
Sticking around near you
Let go of my hand, because my grip loosened long ago

There are plenty more fish in the sea
Next time, don't catch a shark by the tail


NASA Has One Sweet Monopsony On Space Suits

Fingers racing across a circuit board maze
Sadness n the face of the solemn sadst
In a cafe of mistrust and disinterest
They sit and momble amongst themselves
Clinking condiments of synonyms for uncaring

Until the cloaked men walk through in pairs
Three sets staring the diners in the face
"Today we 6 bring the wod of knowledge"
Coats thrown off and guns set ablaze

In a row they stand, a line asserting vigilance
Read splattered walls read, "The Death Of Apathy"



nothing to really explain here...except maybe that a monopsony is a market situation in which there is only one buyer. Other than that just remember metaphors and the like.

Cheers,
xx

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damn, that first one is great.
it put cool images in my head.
the last two lines felt rather cheezy, though.

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I liked the first one, a lot, the second one, I couldn't get into it, the ''in a cafe of mistrust'' sentence confuses me.

the end of the first one is also pretty neat, and this part:

''Leaves in fall bleed red on the landscape
Flowing out from beneath green skin to turn brown and die''

the first one is awesome dude, very good work

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it's monopoly

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No, monopoly has to do with the sellers, not the buyers.

Well, perhaps it's time we had a vocabulary/grammar/literary technique lesson. That way everyone can get these without you having to explain it to them, DarkestHour. Or we can have a 'Shut the Fuck Up if You Dont Know' lesson. Whatever.

this sounds very good.

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