not much explanation is needed for this...it's about my ex-girlfriend (again...yes I need to start pickin better girls from now on) and that's about it.

Tilling The Soil Only to Find Instability and a Personal Epidemic of Catastrophic Proportions

As I paint my face with blood from your hands
After you wiped tears of blood from your eyes
I can taste the discomfort from ages present
When the patterns drip into my mouth, that once tasted as quarters from the last time we met here

You cam crying to me because he'd left you a present
A little gift that'd show itself in six more months
Excuse me, while I vomit on the floor in disgust

You said you loved me, that doesn't mean I'll fuck you
Swallowing pills instead of my seed
Killing a child to try and keep me for your needs

Pardon my apathy, while I turn my back and let you burn, as he sweeps your charred black ashes into his pocket




Ta-da..comments, whatever, it's cool

Cheers,
xx

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Hm interesting stuff again, but I'm not into the whole love subject myself to much, it makes me feel... sad... or something.

However, I do like it, this sentence is killer:

''Pardon my apathy, while I turn my back and let you burn, as he sweeps your charred black ashes into his pocket''


your stuff seems to inspire me man, great work, once again

please take out the "i'll fuck you" line
it's such a turn off.
other than that, its pretty good.

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I'd take that out but I don't really have another way to put it...I mean those were like her exact words. "Why won't you fuck me?" and that's just always stuck in my head, I dunno...

Cheers,
xx

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Your titles always seem to make me laugh, grin, or occasically think. I didn't mind the song.

heh, that statement is exactly the reaction I want to get out of people, killingismbiz. It's good to know it's working. I'm a very sarcastic/tongue in cheek person, so I like to put that kind of crap in my titles. Thanks

Cheers,
xx

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