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Old 2003-02-24, 07:27
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crazy girl returns

Here's another one, again a translation, i like the idea, but the words are somehow not going together:
The Divine Bitch
i'd like to think of myself
as pretty much divine -
you know, the shady eyes and
this ghostlike stance,
flowing in the air instead of walking.
but you call me a bitch,
i know you mean it as a compliment, but still,
i'm pretty much a bitch,
the way i live and talk to people,
those fragile helpless creatures
around me.
so here's a little request:
next time you want to call me a bitch,
think of me as divine,
and then maybe -
you will end up
calling me
the divine bitch.
Old 2003-02-25, 02:57
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Re: crazy girl returns

Originally posted by abadona
The Divine Bitch
i'd like to think of myself
as pretty much divine -

dude your a chick your like what....the only one here?
no one can tell you to turn down your amp unless they're of higher skill or in your band
Why not make shit up as we go-fox
Ok. You're literate, intelligent and funny-FBS

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Old 2003-02-26, 04:20
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Poem or song?

Doesn't really matter because I'm tore between whether I liked it or not. I liked the egotsic whop going on - but it wasn't profound writing for me.

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