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2003-01-25, 13:52
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I'm Dead
Im not suffering
Im just dying
Im not miserable
Im just dead
Dont look down
On me
You must look down
On yourself
You have to live
You have to suffer
I get to die
I get to free myself
Dont cry for me
Cry for yourself
You're alive
Im dead
Im free
You're enslaved
Im aware
You're closeminded
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2003-01-26, 03:24
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Quote:
Im not suffering
Im just dying
Im not miserable
Im just dead
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Okay so, first you're dying, and now your dead. Makes sequencing sense.
Quote:
Dont look down
On me
You must look down
On yourself
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Why must I look down on myself? Is it because I'm living and get to enjoy McDonald's 99 cents hamburger deals??
Quote:
You have to live
You have to suffer
I get to die
I get to free myself
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You just died, no?
Quote:
Dont cry for me
Cry for yourself
You're alive
Im dead
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I found this boring, I already knew you were dead. Also I thought "Dont cry for me/Cry for yourself" to be a cliche.
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Im free
You're enslaved
Im aware
You're closeminded
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How in Hell's nation am I closeminded when I'm living? You're the closeminded one when you're wanting to die/already dead. Dead men don't think. I'm enslaved to what? Life? The white men of the 1800's??
I thought your song was too vague, you kept telling me things I already knew:
1. that you were dead, or dieing.Im not sure which. Hell, maybe you were slipping back and forth through each of the two realms...I don't know.
2. That I must be one unlucky bastard.
*In your Sig. it says that "I HATE YOU ANYWAY!" but your location says "A place where no one hates or kills.." which is wrong because you are hating. No? 
Last edited by killingismybiz : 2003-01-26 at 16:09.
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2003-01-26, 10:56
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Denimwearinghillbilly
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i raelly like that piece of comment you gave  |
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2003-01-26, 21:59
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And i'm Euronymous. (only those will understand who know who Dead was)
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2003-01-26, 22:11
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Post-whore
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yeah i agree with killingismybiz, those are damn boring lyrics
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2003-01-26, 23:34
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The Devil
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Pretty garbage lyrics.
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Through me you pass into the city of woe
Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here
Against the concert of the Immortals he cannot stand alone.
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2003-01-27, 21:58
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oh well, just my attempt at some "i wish i were dead" lyrics. i guess i should stay with lyrics thatll get me laid.
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2003-01-27, 22:10
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With a musically tone deaf she-whore???
Haha. I'm joking. Yeah, my joke was terrible. Better luck next time.
Practice makes better, although in some cases it doesn't.
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2003-02-04, 08:25
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I liked those lyrics. We miserable beings have to live!!! thats not fair!
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2003-02-06, 20:57
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your dead huh join the club ! 
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POW MIA NEVER FORGOTTEN
no one can tell you to turn down your amp unless they're of higher skill or in your band
Why not make shit up as we go-fox
Ok. You're literate, intelligent and funny-FBS
"Calm down, Edgar back in your cage"-far beyond sane
"you suck the cat-avatar-guy doesnt"-The Doc
Now My Legacy Shall Live Forever!!
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2003-02-07, 23:30
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I am a tax on the world..
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Quote:
Originally posted by Mornyano
I liked those lyrics. We miserable beings have to live!!! thats not fair!
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i wrote a song just for you, its called rotten grapefruit:
die, die, die!
i fucking hate you.
eat my seed,
brush your teeth
and piss in your
rotten grapefruit.
commit suicide,
commit murder,
please just fucking
kill yourself.
so i can piss in your
rotting grape fruit.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2003-02-11, 09:50
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New Blood
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Yee! Thanks man.
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2003-03-14, 03:37
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Hahah good one power, haha yeah man you need to learn to make better songs, not you eithe rpower but the other dude. Your song sucked.
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walk through nature's dwelling
hide from obscure trees listening
winter brings gloom, brings remnants of our shadows
twilight casts spells on those who espouse their fate
ice pricks necks like knives, leaving shards of cadaverous skin
tears spout from eyes, shunned from mankind's den
(Prayer For Cleansing/ "A Dead Soal Born")
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