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2003-01-12, 16:03
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I dont believe in gravity
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Black Sun Rising (neurosis-core again)
An usual morning. Black sky peels...
As lightness swallows into homes.
Then the wind strongs up.
And a black rock consumes all the light.
Decay of fetuses, their meet slowly putrefys
Of their mother's tear's avalanche.
Of their soul's coldness.
It simply freezes on their face.
Black sun rising.
Black sun rising.
The great destruction, cleansing the Earth.
But the shadows keep growing.
Whiteness overflew. Balance is corrupted.
Everything becames too blurry.
People see through theirselves,
The truth blinds them all.
The lava stones in their eyes
Melting their brains.
Black sun rising.
Black sun rising.
Everything's black, noone still breaths.
Death was forced upon our planet.
We might keep on moveing and thinking,
Our rotting corpse will continue the carnages.
Created a fake vision of our lives.
Created fake values for our lies.
We're living in our fake reality.
In a prison without walls.
Black sun rising.
Black sun rising.
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Godflesh is good.
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2003-01-12, 22:39
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I am a tax on the world..
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Re: Black Sun Rising (neurosis-core again)
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Originally posted by Katham
Whiteness overflew. Balance is corrupted.
Everything becames too blurry.
People see through theirselves,
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you need to fix this, i don't get it.(grammer)
and i think you misspelled blury, i may be wrong.
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The lava stones in their eyes
Melting their brains.
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this is cool
Quote:
Created a fake vision of our lives.
Created fake values for our lies.
We're living in our fake reality.
In a prison without walls.
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i think you need to mess with this more, change to wording,
you use fake a lot.
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Last edited by powersofterror : 2003-01-12 at 22:42.
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2003-01-19, 12:16
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I dont believe in gravity
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It's supposed to be a huge 'explosion' - that's were whiteness came from.
Balance is corrupted - refers to why the 'explosion' happened.
Everything became too blurry
People see through theirselves,
Well, first of all, the flash is so big, so strong, you see through yourselves, you see the truth, and the big amount of information blurs all your thoughts, makes you confused. But it's too late anyways.
How about an ending like this then:
Created a fake vision of our lives.
Imitating values for our lies.
We're living in our sham reality.
In a prison without walls.
The message of the song is pretty simple - if countries keep fighting wars, the rich still get richer, and the poor still get poorer, we'll kill ourselves. Peace & equality is the keyword. 
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2003-01-19, 13:25
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Master Killer
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finally some good stuff, good going katham, I love it.
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2003-01-20, 21:22
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I am a tax on the world..
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Quote:
Originally posted by Katham
How about an ending like this then:
Created a fake vision of our lives.
Imitating values for our lies.
We're living in our sham reality.
In a prison without walls.
The message of the song is pretty simple - if countries keep fighting wars, the rich still get richer, and the poor still get poorer, we'll kill ourselves. Peace & equality is the keyword.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2003-02-04, 08:31
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New Blood
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thats good. really fucking good.
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