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2009-05-13, 22:39
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Metalhead
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Join Date: May 2006
Location: Nowhere
Posts: 84
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Absence Of Nothing
Its been a while... Good to be here again...
Swallowed alteration delays in absence
Sinking into the complexion of departure
The ponds darkness whispering change
Yet the deity’s wrath continues to condense
He floats gravely still above the water
Holding tight onto the grip of our hearts
Dense thought, delusional fog
Am I awake in a dream of oblivion?
Conjured from the insanity of your entities
I guard unstably in front of my own
Whispering slowly into infinity
I cower under darkness to stay in the light
Slipping into the opacity of the unknown
Listening to the music of each esoteric motion
I fall asunder from the grasp of mankind
Desolated, I disintegrate into the air of life
Spirits gather at my arrival
Into the forest I sing, one with my soul
I am so alive in this indefinite reality
But alone I walk surrendered to verity…
-No Heart
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I Am One With The Darkness Of The Universe, Gathering Light From The Galaxies To Be Reborn.
-No Heart
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2009-05-14, 00:26
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
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Hey, long time no see.  This wasn't too bad. One line kind of messed with my head though. "Holding tight onto the grip of our hearts" doesn't sound like it's in the right order or maybe I'm just reading it wrong. Maybe " Holding tightly, gripping onto our hearts."
Lots of imagery in it. Good to see you post here again.
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Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2009-05-15, 19:05
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Post-whore
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Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Ballater, Scotland, UK.
Posts: 1,128
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Haha. I found this to confusingly switch between the more romantic imagery of some folk and black metal and the cybernetic, mathematical verbosity of Meshuggah.
The last verse even made me think of Native American sentiments.
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