2009-05-14, 00:26
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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Hey, long time no see. This wasn't too bad. One line kind of messed with my head though. "Holding tight onto the grip of our hearts" doesn't sound like it's in the right order or maybe I'm just reading it wrong. Maybe " Holding tightly, gripping onto our hearts."
Lots of imagery in it. Good to see you post here again.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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