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Old 2009-05-13, 22:39
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Absence Of Nothing

Its been a while... Good to be here again...

Swallowed alteration delays in absence
Sinking into the complexion of departure
The ponds darkness whispering change
Yet the deity’s wrath continues to condense

He floats gravely still above the water
Holding tight onto the grip of our hearts
Dense thought, delusional fog
Am I awake in a dream of oblivion?

Conjured from the insanity of your entities
I guard unstably in front of my own
Whispering slowly into infinity
I cower under darkness to stay in the light

Slipping into the opacity of the unknown
Listening to the music of each esoteric motion
I fall asunder from the grasp of mankind
Desolated, I disintegrate into the air of life

Spirits gather at my arrival
Into the forest I sing, one with my soul
I am so alive in this indefinite reality
But alone I walk surrendered to verity…

-No Heart
I Am One With The Darkness Of The Universe, Gathering Light From The Galaxies To Be Reborn.
-No Heart
Old 2009-05-14, 00:26
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Hey, long time no see. This wasn't too bad. One line kind of messed with my head though. "Holding tight onto the grip of our hearts" doesn't sound like it's in the right order or maybe I'm just reading it wrong. Maybe " Holding tightly, gripping onto our hearts."
Lots of imagery in it. Good to see you post here again.
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Old 2009-05-15, 19:05
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Haha. I found this to confusingly switch between the more romantic imagery of some folk and black metal and the cybernetic, mathematical verbosity of Meshuggah.

The last verse even made me think of Native American sentiments.

Nice one, I guess.

Originally Posted by fatdanny
Also, check out Autopsy, the vocalist sounds like hes about to eat your grandmother while fucking you in the eye. Brutal.

Originally Posted by floridadude
I coated the end of a toothpick with Satan's blood and simply wiped it across the top of an omelet. PERFECT!

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