An Ever Ending Road

A broken heart has been replaced. Forever motto’s have been rephrased. My heart ached by thinking I could ever lose you. Your heart would be with someone else. Our road would never part Our history the same. My heard has melted. But the fire faded



An unborn dream

Calm outside they would never see. The green leaves fall from the ageing tree. Empty eyes filled the room with blood. The smiling boy a troubled man. A sun never to be seen. A ray send not to be received. A dream never to see the light. Unborn, already broken

not really finished however it could fit in a screamcore song easily.

what do you think about it?

an ever ending road sounds pretty sentimental to me but the second one is pretty cool. I'd like to read the rest of it.

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hey def - not bad, you can do other things than play bass!

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thanks

I do some backing vocals in my band and I switch roles with our vocalist for one song...
I don't do much of our lyrics though, my inspiration only comes to me in bits and pieces...

sounds pretty cool dude, will you give me the lyrics when they're finished? see ya soon.

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Those are definite hardcore lyrics. A lot of your other stuff reminds me of old Vision Of Disorder, but I don't even know what to compare this to. Very rad my friend.

Cheers,
xx

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