http://rapidshare.com/files/93328230/a.mid.html

Please critique it. Ignore the slight pause about halfway through.
It is based off natural minor, harmonic minor, and pentatonic scales in the key of E.

Please don't be too hard on me I'm only 15 and been playing/learning theory since August 07.

And before people ask, yes, I am able to play it in real life, but I had no means of recording.

Here is it with guitar:
http://rapidshare.com/files/9333185..._songs.mid.html
I wrote it before hearing guitars, so I was extremely lucky that it fit (and was even in same key!)