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2002-11-12, 05:07
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New Blood
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Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: Evergreen Park
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new song again what ya think?
tell me what ya think of lyrics
MY HOLE
When I lay down
I close my eyes
Begin to think
My life is full of lies
Im in a world
Which I can not escape
I feel theres no one
With whom I can relate
Chorus
A light shines
In a small and narrow place
And I know
That this is my eternal place
Cause these chains
Keep me locked up and bound
Until the day
Till the day that I am found
I take a breath
Inhale the sacred alibies
And with this
I pray for God to save my life
Becuase Im shackled
And chained up to the ground
And with these chains
Are the reason I am bound
Chorus
A light shines
In a small and narrow place
And I know
That this is my eternal place
Cause these chains
Keep me locked up and bound
Until the day
Till the day that I am found
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rock on man
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2002-11-12, 05:10
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Forum Daemon
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Join Date: Aug 2001
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Please dont just say "New song!" in every entry title. Why not putting the song title there instead?
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2002-11-12, 05:25
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Senior Metalhead
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Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: Albuquerque, New Mexico
Posts: 158
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They're pretty good, they also flow smoothly.
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2002-11-14, 21:10
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Post-whore
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Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: Look out behind you! That monkey has a knife!
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i didnt think it was that good. you rhyme "place" with "place". you should work on that. too repetitive.
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2002-11-16, 00:55
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New Blood
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Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: Hell
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sounds like one of those things you would say before you go to sleep
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2002-11-16, 23:11
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Supreme Metalhead
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Join Date: Apr 2002
Location: Scotland
Posts: 756
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SOunds like you'r having a Sex change
"My hole"...
Almost as funny as NOFx - My Vagina
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2002-11-17, 11:27
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Master Killer
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Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Utrecht, The Netherlands
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it's better then the other lyrics you posted but again, it's tooooo damn repetitive.
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