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Broken Hope

2007-10-24, 14:34

Infinity

Life is pain.

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Broken Hope

Dead hope in a world of dead dreams
Dead man in a grave in the dead earth
Dead teen in a dead laneway
Dead infant in a dead deathbed
Dead love in a boys dead head
Dead x dead y dead z
I'm sick of life
You call me weak
I don't fucking care.
Inconsolable grief
Overwhelming sadness
Fuck everything

2007-10-24, 14:37

Transient

HES BAAACK

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the band was better than this poem
especially dead xyz

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2007-10-24, 20:07

Requiem

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Transient

the band was better than this poem
especially dead xyz

His poems suck.

2007-11-02, 16:53

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Inconsolable grief
Overwhelming sadness

Those two lines are good.. but the repetition of dead and fuck kinda wrecks it in my opinion.

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