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Old 2007-09-16, 22:04
PanzerDiv
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Join Date: Sep 2007
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First time writing

I'm here...right here
But not for long
Don't be sad
You have nothing to fear
I'll come back for you
I'll see you soon


Hope for the two of us
But it's dangerous
It's dangerous

---Chorus---
I deal with this
This is really all i can do
You try hard to miss
but the blows land
oh how they land
the past is creeping up...once again

I'm here...right here
To stay for good
I love you
Shed not another tear
I've come back for you
come back for you

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Like I said, my first time writing lyrics/poetry, so I would love some criticism.

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