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Old 2007-09-11, 21:28
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For. You.

As I stride past, the eye gouged masses
Through their blindness I see.....
A world RAPED, with deeds of flesh
And blood drenched misery

I stood, to the one
From the time it begain
Seeking reform, from the masses
Saturated in failure again

Finding the light in my eyes
She screamed
As the illuminesence dies.........
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Old 2007-09-12, 09:27
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Pretty cool, although may want to try luminescence because illuminesence is not a word.
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"So often our hands get caught up in ruts of muscle memory. 'Muscle memory' is an accurate term. We get used to doing certain things, without even being aware of them. This ultimately not only shapes and therefore limits our technique, it also shapes what we compose, what we write. We end up thinking still unknowingly trapped in that box." -Adam Nitti

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buy a stick of graphite (art stores) and rub it into your nut
 
Old 2007-09-15, 04:32
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