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2007-07-24, 11:40
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The Jester Among Giants
Thanks for reading.
"The Jester Among Giants"
Deepset anguish inwardly embraced
Unparched eyes revel victoriously
Contemplation of self-condemnation
Wondering where it all went wrong
Leeched thoughts abstractly shaped
Not aware what form they'll take
Longing to see things in black and white
But their aversion to me is evident
Explosions of solitary colors
Yet uniqueness is in each frame
Maybe I should add myself to their greenery
And explode my leaves with them
Top turtle in my field and ruler of all I look down upon
Eyeing the kingdom and planning it's future
When my own is so mismanaged
Creative chaos
High above and broad as can be
Shadowing plans of new pursuits
They force me into a pigeon-hole
Without a word
One on each side
And I see what I am as their arms stretch passively
For a time before their sudden explosion and rest
I realize I'm the jester among giants
BJH
7/24/2007
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2007-09-11, 21:26
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I like it alot... so articulate
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2007-09-12, 14:00
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Yeah, the language and imagery here was top-notch. Strong sense of resolve, or reaching a point, summary or conclusion.
Brilliant!
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2007-09-12, 14:59
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shit...this english is too high for me!! I could understand few parts, but not all!!!!!
but for what i figured out, its nice!
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2007-09-21, 00:46
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Thanks guys. 
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2007-11-15, 08:39
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Supreme Metalhead
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Location: Massachusetts
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I love it! Great work. I wouldn't change anything. how do you do it, LB??
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Everyone is wrong.
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