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Old 2007-07-09, 17:42
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first one:
Arcan Maltra.

rough, i hate doing things within rigid lines so, GP doesn't always come out to the full effect of what i'm trying to say, but hopefully you'll get the message

second one:
celestial tempest,
just a few ideas not a full fledged song

third one:
i don't recommend listening to it. gallops never come out well for me because they are two short notes and one marginally bigger one instead of three equals.
just look at it and try playing it. it comes pretty naturally, so you'll probably know what i'm trying to do with the first riff
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Old 2007-07-09, 18:21
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Good stuff.

Arcan Maltra reminds me of Gorguts whom I love. Very evil sounding riffs and dissonant stuff. Would love to hear it recorded with drums and vocals.
 
Old 2007-07-09, 21:05
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my gpro5 isn't working it appears? It says i need to update it, since its a cracked version i am going to assume i fucked it up hahaha. Anyway to get this in midi? PM me if you don't feel like reposting
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Old 2007-07-09, 22:19
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This is good, reminds me tons of old school Gorguts.

I like your sense of melody.
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Also, check out Autopsy, the vocalist sounds like hes about to eat your grandmother while fucking you in the eye. Brutal.


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Old 2007-07-09, 23:04
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thanks guys
as many of you know i do love gorguts
 
Old 2007-07-10, 15:27
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Can you post them as midi?
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Old 2007-07-11, 01:30
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Old 2007-07-11, 14:05
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Old 2007-07-11, 15:09
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here ya go!
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Old 2007-07-15, 23:58
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Sicsixsix i got it as midi just for you and i will be very disappointed with you if you don't listen to it. No supper for you
 
Old 2007-07-16, 03:21
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They all have potential to be great, but seriously you need the other tracks.
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Old 2007-07-16, 03:23
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They all have potential to be great, but seriously you need the other tracks.


i just hate putting them into digital.
i like actually playing them.

I WISH I HAD RECORDING EQUIPMENT!!!

is there any cheap recording stuff that any of you guys know of? that would be great
 
Old 2007-08-29, 18:49
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OK guys here is a track i've worked really hard on, and i'm really fucking proud of it. i hope at least that unanything listens to it but if anyone else did i would be thrilled.
it's very very long but give it a chance, the best parts are at the end!!!

ENJOY!
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Old 2007-08-29, 19:00
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OK guys here is a track i've worked really hard on, and i'm really fucking proud of it. i hope at least that unanything listens to it but if anyone else did i would be thrilled.
it's very very long but give it a chance, the best parts are at the end!!!

ENJOY!


Oooh hoo hoo! Gotta give this a listen!
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Old 2007-08-30, 00:37
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gp4 version please
 
Old 2007-08-30, 02:30
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my gpro5 isn't working it appears? It says i need to update it, since its a cracked version i am going to assume i fucked it up hahaha. Anyway to get this in midi? PM me if you don't feel like reposting

See my sig for the latest version. The crack hasn't fucked up your app, it's just that a tab made in version 5.2 won't work in version 5.1
 
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gp4 version please


alright

hope you enjoy
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Old 2007-08-30, 04:29
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the intro is too long seriously and low the bass sound when the guitar is there, but you have your own style and its good like that, keep working on it!
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Old 2007-08-30, 04:33
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the intro is too long seriously and low the bass sound when the guitar is there, but you have your own style and its good like that, keep working on it!

maybe you should read the lyrics,
the music of Section 1 acommodates only one line of prose
same with Section 2.

but how did you think about the music?
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Old 2007-08-30, 04:46
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Old 2007-08-30, 12:00
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Well, I PM-ed by thoughts to you, but i guess I'll post them here too.

That was pretty epic. I liked it. It wasn't what I was expecting, but it is great. Who am I to expect or want something of someone else's music?

Very gloomy too! Did you invoke or raise J.S. Bach from the dead for some help with this?
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Old 2007-08-31, 00:37
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alright

hope you enjoy


I really didn't enjoy it at all. Attributed to poor songwriting imo.
 
Old 2007-08-31, 01:17
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as in riff structures? or did you not like the riffs at all
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Old 2007-08-31, 03:33
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no just reduce your intro and few riffs, i can be good, you need to work on it. work on your style. I had the same problem too, and i still have to work on it, so continue your work upgrade it and you will have good result!
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Old 2007-08-31, 09:00
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Forget what Bob is saying, the intro is aight.

Some or most of the bass harmony lines were pretty funk in a non musical way.

Then some of the riffs just seemed really boring. Maybe better with drums but I doubt it.
 
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Forget what Bob is saying, the intro is aight.

Some or most of the bass harmony lines were pretty funk in a non musical way.

Then some of the riffs just seemed really boring. Maybe better with drums but I doubt it.


yeah it's my first time using bass lines but that's no excuse anyways.
which riffs sucked to you

hopefully not the :



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----------------9-10---8-7-
--0000000--610------8-----4-----

one.
i love that one.
i also love the:

--------4-4--4-4-------------3-3-3-3
--4444-4-4--4--4----3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3

one

i realize that the bass line which harmonizwes with the circle of 5ths type riff needs a different degree of harmonization. the major 4th is not working out
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yeah it's my first time using bass lines but that's no excuse anyways.
which riffs sucked to you

hopefully not the :



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--0000000--610------8-----4-----

one.
i love that one.
i also love the:

--------4-4--4-4-------------3-3-3-3
--4444-4-4--4--4----3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3

one

i realize that the bass line which harmonizwes with the circle of 5ths type riff needs a different degree of harmonization. the major 4th is not working out


Major 4th?! Perfect 4th, or major 3rd did you mean? Sorry, being a nitpicker, but...

And how about the other guys lay off, the song is already very strange and distinct, how can you possibly speak as if there is some checklist of good form for this?!?! This is down to JOAM 's taste alone.
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Old 2007-09-02, 23:41
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Major 4th?! Perfect 4th, or major 3rd did you mean? Sorry, being a nitpicker, but...

And how about the other guys lay off, the song is already very strange and distinct, how can you possibly speak as if there is some checklist of good form for this?!?! This is down to JOAM 's taste alone.



o0h yeah
i cofuse fret markers with degrees
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Old 2007-09-20, 02:24
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here it is.
My sprawling 12 minute prog composition for all those interested.
organ, bass, and guitar.
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Old 2007-09-22, 01:59
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hello?
anyone wanna listen?
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Old 2007-09-30, 06:10
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PROG PIECE OF ABOUT 12:22 minutes
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Old 2007-10-01, 00:55
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maybe its me, but it sounds completely random (maybe too progressive for my ears).

you should pay way more attention to the harmony of this piece, theres too much dissonace going on, or you might did that on purpose
 
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maybe its me, but it sounds completely random (maybe too progressive for my ears).

you should pay way more attention to the harmony of this piece, theres too much dissonace going on, or you might did that on purpose

dissonance?

i don't hear dissonance at all?
how is it random. did i post the right thing?

EDIT; where is there dissonance to you?
like could you post times? cuz this is meant to have some RUsh parts and some Genesis parts. maybe you just don't like the sound of the organ?
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Old 2007-10-03, 08:40
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maybe my midi settings fucked shit up, but it's sounds completely off most times (well, actually i only listened the first minute).

im not intro prog at all, hahaha
 
Old 2007-10-03, 23:30
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weird.

EDIT:
ha of all the death metal songs i write, you listen to the prog one
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Old 2007-10-09, 22:05
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I think you have some cool ideas in all of your songs. I especially like the dissonant feel, Gorguts around From Wisdom to hate / Obscura era, I was stuck on that stuff as well for some time. I listened to Colossus Pulse and it had some very cool riffs that would make a great song, however it was too long for my taste and without drums and stuff it's not much variety.

But yea, you should definitely record some of your songs. Cheap recording gear would be V-amp 2 / Pod XT for recording guitars + cubase and ezdrummer to fix the drums and recording, that's kinda what I use and you can make some pretty damn decent recordings with those if you know your stuff (see Periphery).
 
Old 2007-12-08, 16:21
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New track in the works.

I won't say anything about it before anyone listens
so go ahead and try it!
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Old 2007-12-08, 22:45
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acoustic stuff is nice ... kind of baroque hetfield haha sry that's probably not what you want to hear. real nice though.

when the strings start to take off around bar 96 it gets interesting, kind of like emperor with the intricate runs interlocking.

the finale is kind of plunky and weird without percussion, i'm having trouble envisioning how it's supposed to sound.

this is definitely the most listenable stuff you've posted yet. i think your melodies and counterpoint are really good ... looking forward to you putting some of your parts together into a cohesive song. (with drums too!)

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