Just thought I'd share some of my compositions with you guys for some critique.
First off is a really old DM tune I wrote for a project. Kinda influenced by Amorphis back then, and it's pretty simple.
Second one can be found here: http://www.myspace.com/darknightmoonshadow
It's a band recording with vocals and everything. Recorded it pretty quickly at a rehearsal. Keyboards and drums are unfortunately MIDI. I was trying to mix death metal and doom metal with this project (yeah the name is cheesy and was meant as a joke-project at first, but we decided to try and do it more seriously in the end)
And heres a few really old thrash tunes.
Intro of the first one is kinda ripped off from my favourite thrash tune.